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Displeasure by Chaluny Displeasure by Chaluny
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Nobody had forecast it. Not even herself. She thought that she was one of the particular hunds, a loner. Now when she reflected her past she was not sure if she really wanted to be alone forever. Kendra simply thought there could not be another part, a mate, somebody who loves her personality. Other helhunds were never attractive for her. There did not exist much contact to other females and males always tried to henpeck her. Why is he that different, she thought by herself. He was kind from the beginning, has much respect and empathy… Kendra dart a glance at him. Nayan looked pensive. They met and hunted together the last three weeks but until today Kendra did not really know his younger brother Naik. Nayan said it is time to meet each other in person. But now he was rather quiet. “You seem worried”, she remarked. Nayan smiled “Really? Sorry.. But my brother is a bit.. I imagine that you could have some differences.” “Why?” “Oh, he’s a little blowhard”, he smiled again “and he could have a problem with your assertiveness.” Kendra laughed “Kay, I remember. I ran across him by the tournament.” Nayan sighed and Kendra nudged him with her nose “Don’t worry. I won’t bite him.. very hard if he misbehaves..”.
They went a broad trail uphill. Arrived their eyes met for a second. It was conspicuous that he looks startled. So Kendra realized that Nayan had not told him who exactly the female is. “I'm really glad you're here!” Nayan said. “You must be kidding!” hissed Naik and point to Kendra. Then he tried to thrust aside his brother “She?” “Please Naik..” “But you- She.. Why? She is the most imperius hund I’ve ever seen.” Kendra sat down and disapprovingly she observed Naik’s childish trials. Nayan spoke to his brother “Okay, read my lips, please. This is more than an ecstasy or something.. I love her. I love her really much and nothing can shift. You don’t know this feeling but this is which we are searching in our live: Our counterpart, the significant other. You meet this person and you feel an affinity that you can’t explain. You only know this feeling is right and you will never lose it… Do you understand brother? It’s not the outward appearance or a flawless nature. Someday you will see that these features aren’t crucial .” Nayan ceased to speak. His younger brother silenced for a while. Then he stand up and looked in Nayan’s scarry face. He puffed “You’re right.. I can’t understand this feeling. But when you’re happy with your decision.. I think I can live with it.” Nayan smiled. With his tongue he stroke above Naik's face. Then he turned to Kendra. Although she would not show if she was very emotional because of his words. She knew that he was the hund she can entrust her live.

to be continue

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The next part of Nayan's and Kendra's little story.
This time it is an watercolor picture. It's nice to draw only snow xD
But it took so long to write the text.. Maah, I like writing stories but it's hard in english.. Hope you still like it :3

Species and basic design of Nayan and Kendra © *CheshireSmile
Nayan & Naik © *Mikaley
Kendra © Chaluny
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InsaneBestumis Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh, snap. :o
Cobalt-Flame Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
You draw the best helhund pictures <333 I really love how you manage to put so much detail into the snow and such :D
Chaluny Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Aww, thanks so much :blushes:
Cobalt-Flame Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Your welcome!
CheshireSmile Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
D: im speechless, first i lvoe this image, i was cracking up instantly when i saw naik being a butt, jealous, kendra's expression is perfect, calculating, listening, and never phased by anything. Nayan of course his eyes just pour out all of his sincerity. of course the watercolor looks lovely, and makes them all standout so beautifully. And then there is the awesome story, perfect, it captured everything i was hoping for from the picture, and even better getting to see them meet and have to face this change in their relationships. <3
Chaluny Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Oh thank you,
thank you soo much :hug:
Reading your lovely comment makes me happy.
CheshireSmile Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
ImagineCorgis Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really beautiful and amazing! :heart:
And I love the story, cant wait for the next part :D
Chaluny Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
Aww, thanks :hug:
ImagineCorgis Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome :hug:
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